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Trying to get deeper

Crimson is spilling
Off my wrists again
And all I can think
About is what you did
And what you do to me

Tears are dripping off my face
And in the dark
I see that it's all been a lie
I know that for you
I never will be enough
I never really was

So I'll just stand here in anguish
With you making me feel like nothing
Like I'm stupid
And wrong for ever being upset
Because thats all you ever do

You only try to cover it up
But never really solve the problem
But the small crack you created
Has turned into a huge hole
And with every little lie
Its getting deeper

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not that good but what ever

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