Together our bodies make the beat,
to the rythem of our lost love.
Tangled in sheets of firey passion,
lost in momments of bliss.
Riding waves of pleasure
As she swells my raging desire,
I provoke her darker side.
Lost in the jungle of emotion
Wandering forgotten trails of platonic love
Wishing it would last forever, but it wont.
Together our bodies made the rhythm,
to the beat of natures passions
Author notes
Ok well I think I could have done better, but this is the first time I have written a poem like this. Let me know if it too erotic.
A contest entry
- love me in sign language... by Princess Derge.
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Comments
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......def not about me...hmmmm......
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this is sexyy!
its very pretty. i love your word choice and how theres a kindof exotic feeling to it.
watch your spelling- i usually dont have a big problem with grammar, but some of your words are confusing "riding" "rhythm"
nice write :]
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