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Temptation

Beautiful blood,
wicked desire,
burning passion,
the breaking of dawn,
clouded dreams,
captured stars,
flames and wine,
the lovely temptation I see in your eyes.

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  • Susan E. Pennycuff
    July 23
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    very nice...
    I think if you had this listed
    in the dark category you would also
    get some reads as well
    because although at first glance
    it might not appear a dark write
    it does fit nicely into the dark category
    and those who read dark poetry will appreciate this one
    and the beauty it brings


  • SilentLolita
    July 22
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    Love it. <3

    Reminds me of vampires. :0 Lovely write!!