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web of love

love, something no one can control,
well, me, i'm stuck in a web of love,
trying so very hard to get out.

stuck between two spiders,
one sweet and nice who i can open up to,
but i feel invisible sometimes to him,
the other,
sweet and mysterious,
and i feel so at home with him,
but there's something stuck between me and them,
love.

i can't just choose,
i have to make sure of it,
i love them both so very much.

And now,
as i cry in the corner,
not knowing what to do,
who to choose,
i bring the blade up to my wrist one last time before i lay my head to rest,
slide it down my wrist swiftly,
and watch quietly as the mysterious ribbon of black-red blood pulses out of my arm,
i smile and lay down to rest
eternally blocking out the rest of the earth surrounding me.

Author notes

i'm rlly srry i haven't wrote anything for a while.... there was a... complication, but it's all good.... srry i think this 1 sucks....

can u relate?

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  • nah....

    it doesnt suck but honestly its not the best thing ever. its like rlllly good but not that good if u get what im saying. lol
    (i just sounded like a gangster )

    and yes i can relate alot....

    but i give you 3 applause. lol