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PainedLoner

If the moon comes to home
To hide the sunshine
Will you ever feel the light
of moon over the sunshine

I wanted to ask many questions
But I needn't ask
Cause you replied everything
In one sentence
Life will move forward and move fast
If we are together
Heart will heal the pain we ever had
If we hold each other

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  • Sharon Marie gold member
    July 24
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    Nice

    Like the flow and rhyme good analgy.nice write keep the pen flowing!

    Blessings!
    Sharon

  • beautiful

    i like it, it sorta made me smile but at the same time i felt like i might start crying


  • PainedLoner
    July 22
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    Beautifully written! Well done!