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Treaty

My sister comes over for Christmas
She loudly walks through the door
I'm utterly annoyed immediately
Never getting along like oil and water
Trying to hold in my craving to argue,
As she smirks and welcomes it
Finally I grin back and give her a caring hug
"Love you sis"

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Prompt "Enter grace... and gift me peace" - kiwigirljacks

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  • Pure Thought silver member
    July 23

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    Such a treaty would bring you peace.

    nice, good luck,
    Buddy


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 23

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    LOL.. I like where you took the prompt! I'm fortunately that my brothers and I get along fabulously, but I do like to tease them occasionally lol


  • evilbatwoman
    July 22

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    I know this situation all too well. It's so true. It is a good write.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    July 22

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    I know this all too well... but that is what siblings are all about...creative with nice flow...

    Best,

    mystic