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Laura & Her Love

poor girl, her end so tragic
with love by her side
crushed
not by a broken heart
or tears that fall
but by a broken windshield
a split second and...

the dreamer and her dreams
the lover and his schemes
her smile
her breath, their lives --
gone.

where they were going
doesn't matter now
a thousand light years from here
she's serving tea to the angels
who are asking for sweet & low
instead of sugar

and he's waiting for her
in a castle above the stars

Author notes

RIP Laura
(December 1982-July 2009)

Prompt: Sweet & Low

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  • Aww.. this was so tender,
    so deeply heartfelt with
    personal emotion. Sorry
    about the death of your
    friend Laura

    This was a beautiful
    way to be inspired from
    the lyrics as well as in
    remembering her.

    I loved this hun;
    it is REAL.

    Should have won a trophy!

  • bittersweet.