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Twisting in the wind

So as i sit here waiting for you a storm picks up. i stand and wander and the breeze picks me up and carries me away. i feel so free twisting in the wind. my mind races and my heart stops you left me here to die. i shake away the memories of you. so dark and dank i let the wind twist and turn my thoughts and they paint a picture. a man not to far from me dancing in the wind. i fly over and forever more we are left twisting in the wind.

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