Let lasting earth's infinity till then."
It is part of the world created.
what can the world be,
what can humans do.
I must own a spaceship
to fly to the moon.
I will become weak
I should own a robot
to do my work for me.
Human should have power
Intellectuals can see the future
Scientists are still discovering
a cure for global warming
How much can the polar caps endure.
We already seen floods,
hurricanes and tornadoes.
What happens next , we do not know.
The world is precious
but we need a genious to save us.
Somehow in the future
We can deal with any weather
so this will keep us together
with many places on earth
we share many ideas about how we can stay here.
we find ways to survive
there are no limits as long as we are alive.
Author notes
I added a few lines
and they are so true
we will always find a way to stay on earth
A contest entry
- 2060AD by pineapple-eyes.
1050 points, ended July 24, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Lots to take in, and the line, "This earth should last till infinity." should be changed to this, "seemingly the earth should last for always, 'infinity' in the context you've put it will be a little hard for people to generalise, as infinity would be best like, with the word 'deep' in front of it, adding a forced which in this case, escapes all generalisation to make it plausable. So, your line again, "" /
"Let lasting earth's infinity till then." Therefore giving it a bit of hope rather than a definate viewpoint,
You'd be quite surprised that after the first line, people could go off of an otherwise magical piece. A Thumbs up otherwise. Lovely -
Very Thoughtful Excellent Poem
Global warming is a serious problem. We will find a way to solve it, because we want to go on living on this earth.
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I like this write as you bring up some important facts such as lazy humans and global warming. I kind of feel this should be the writing on the wall for the here and now so we don't get to the point which other people have written about.
The only part I don't agree with is the ending as I believe each and everyone of us has the power to save the earth......
This is just my views though and I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter and giving me food for thought.
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The writer was always a genius trying to destroy what we confirm as the outrageous. I believe the bible, with its insightfulness is so misinterpreted, it is found in words alone to approximate what is seen to be reasobale to suggest. I do not beleive that any genius can be answer our queries, than one way obvious and the other is oblivious that we follow our instincts.
Space travel is fine, but there is a certain cuve we are afflicted to having and that is the gravitational pull of interest. Once that flags, we are at loss to the destiny that may speak of, but to be honest, this is back to the place of one's origin.
To put into a nut shell, the comfort zone from which embryoic felt, we as adults, feel the same to keep it silent, like death I suppose. A Lovely read!
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Wonderful
Yes, it would take a genius to fix some of our problem. A very nice write for the prompt. best of luck in the contest.
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