The rich sun is spilling down upon me from overhead
I squint, as I look upwards
Enjoying the beautiful summer day
Walking around, smelling flowers
I think 'What a pretty rose I have here'
I decide it shall go in my hair
Jumping into the pool
Now is playtime for little summer kids
Out of school, nothing to worry about
Let's jump in
As I wonder about, I recognize the lovely scene before me
I can smell it's fresh smell
See it fresh sights
It's summer
The nice sunset is above me
Pinks, oranges, and yellows
I look up, and enjoy the wonderful summer evening
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7-22-09
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Beautifully colorful image of the perfect summer day...and evening
This is a wonderful poem and gives me a warm peaceful feeling. Thank you.
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Thanks for this lovely summer scene! If there's anything that I would change, it would be to add some more details and flavor and make it unique... Tell me what you hear, what the flowers smell like when you smell them, and even the taste of the breeze. Thanks very much for entering, and keep up the writing!
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great
Very nice indeed. Just beautiful. Thanks for sharing and entering my contest.
Good luck.
Brian
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