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love me...

i look for you in my dreams,
but i can never find you,
i feel like such a fiend.

You mean everything to me,
i hate to have to do this,
it hurts, can't you see?

I still want to be with you,
the question is ,
do you want me too?

I'm going to let you go now,
you need to be free.
I love you chase....for all eternity....

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Written March 26th, 2004

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  • anticipation
    April 25, 2004
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    im sorry to hear about that, it is a very hard thing to break things off with someone, but if the feeling isnt there, why pretend it is? if you dont love the person anymore, you cannot just pretend that everything is ok otherwise you will just end up in a worse situation... it is a good thing that you broke things off when you did, so do not feel bad about it, you both will move on and find new people, it was a great write, so keep it up!

  • MidNight
    March 26, 2004
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    this poem came out of no-where, thats why its not that good...i just broke up with my fiance....and i'm confused about where to go from here.....plz, any advice would be much appreciated...thanx

  • fishinglad
    March 26, 2004
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    10/10

    Well doooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooone its a very good poem .keep on writing because you diserve the praise.