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My Memories R Fading

When you left I died inside.
Three weeks later I was burning inside.
My memories are fading.
My actions are scarce.
I think of you as my life turns around.   
I have moved on what about you?
My heart is pounding of you.
My memories are gone. 

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  • Bob Fox
    November 14

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    Poet

    those memories of pain and loss. You will find that there are to be used a lessons in life. Use the carefully and smile .


  • Andre ben-YEHU
    September 25

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    Profound...


    Live emotions from a heart that pumps romance and reality. "My Memories R Fading" flows and paints a moment of loss in poetic expressios.

    Keep posting. Thank You.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


  • XxShOoTiNgStArxX
    July 25

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    O damn, How lovely written!! So short, But full of emotion! Full of truth and from your heart!! I have definitly felt this way a time or two, hell even three!! lol!!! From beginning to end, this is a Excellent write!! Fantastic!! Keep up the truth and heart!!
    *Kelsi*