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The Gift

I sing for you
Songs of the wind
And songs of the sea

I dream for you
Dreams of the wild ocean
And dreams of quiet nights

I feel for you
The hurt you turn away from
The broken part of your heart

And I give to you
All the protection
My love can offer

Oh, it's all I have left to give

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  • ailill
    July 22

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    Sweet poem. good imagery.. Hmmm... maybe take out the repetitive parts? Like songs and dreams? - just an idea