crying eyes

Can you be so postive when I'm so negative?
Its a chemical that can not be counteractive
But i believe from these crying eyes you can tell
that I care
I'm not like everyone else, I'm not the happiest criminal of the heart
but my heart is true and so are the words I say to you
I do I tell you
I do love you
Don't you believe me?

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July 23, 2009
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