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a Promise to Keep

A promise to keep is a promise to make. To love you is a promise to make. To stay with you is a promise to keep but to deal with the pain and anger from you is not a promise to keep or make. To give you my heart is a promise I will eventually make but not to keep I cant let you keep you keep something that is not all mine or all yours but to give you me is both a promise to make and keep.

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  • Andre ben-YEHU
    September 25

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    Wonderful...


    There is a great poetential (Poetic Potential) in "a Promise to Keep".

    Keep writing and posting.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


  • Apocalyptic Scarves
    July 22
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    i like this. seriously.
    good use a little editing to make it a bit more clear, but i like it.