You are burning,
Itching with fear,
For the sand beneath
Considers you edible.
Should I soothe you
Or scratch you?
Neither, I will just
Allow you to sink
Deeper and deeper
Into time.
Author notes
Prompt-- {[Photo: "Sand Of Time" by MoOnshine90]}
A contest entry
- Quickie time! by perfectsunset.
625 points, ended July 22, 7 entries
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Comments
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interesting take on the prompt and meaninful poem!
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what wonderfully original poem this is.
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interesing
very interesting lolz great write
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cool
this is a cool poem....a great take on the prompt....the sub narrative jumps out...great stuff......keep chillin
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I really liked this a lot.
Your concepts were very
wisely expressed in a sort
of abstract way, that held
my attention throughout
and left me pondering
the brilliance.
Thanks for entering & best of luck
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