How do I love thee?
Well there isn't much to say.
Not a day passes by with a thought of you.
Your attitude, causes me to tremble in your presence.
Your laugh, reminds me of a mad scientist gone psycho.
Your eyes, are like two orbs in your head used to see the world.
Your nose, is your nose.
You shine with the brilliance of a burned out light bulb.
Your intelligence, speaks of many things, though the answer is either yes or no.
Talking to you, is like talking to someone i can relate to all too well.
You may not know me as well as you would like to, but thats OK.
I dare not walk on the ground you walk on, since I prefer an alternate route, due to the fact that I'd never want to follow.
Is it truly better to have loved and lost, than to have never loved?
To that question, there is no answer, nor am I trying to insinuate something.
I hope that you received this letter and that you share the same feelings.
My burning love for you is starting to consume and destroy my inner soul, in flames.
Author notes
2) Write a non-typical love poem, something that makes me think about love in a whole different way, expresses your love, or your pain of breaking up, in a completely new voice with none of the tired out metaphors and phrases
this was definitly a fake love letter [prank admirer letter] that a friend and i sent to two guys that we disliked a lot. she had edited it to actually sound like a love letter, but then it was just wierd. it was great fun, 'cause actually the 2 ppl we sent it to believed it for a while. so yeah. i really dont know why i added this as a poem. i just thought it would be funny.
so yeah, i dont write actual love letters, but if anyone needs one expressing hatred or something, PM me or IM me @ pyrotec746 [AIM]
ĪLATERĪ
Written March 26th, 2004
A contest entry
- Land of Honorable Mentions by ack1013.
300 points, ended December 29, 2004, 7 entries
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funny and cute!
Sorry it is taking so long to judge. -
marvellous
oo harsh...i like it...good lil letter there. awesome!
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very wonderfull!!
very very good....i love it....i like how you relate the body parts to things.....very wonderfull......keep up the good work.....bugbye^,^ heather -
Ha! What an interesting story behind that...I like it, but that was kind of a cruel joke to play on two people you didn't like No, really, it is good and kind of funny..."Your nose is your nose."Nice comic relief there...Keep it up for sure!
-HaNnAh WaS hErE...(DS)
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