Sing me across the sky
To a place where I belong
Where nothing will go awry
And I will feel more strong.
Whisk me along the rivers
To lands that I fit in.
The oceans will give me shivers,
The currents will make me spin.
Let me be a part
Of all that is natural.
Help me to depart
Of this grave reality.
Throw me above the mountains
Let's defy fatality.
Look me in the eye
Get rid of my mortality.
Author notes
A test at a new / different style of writing. Please constructive criticism only.
A contest entry
- Prewrites, Im crazy. by Menna.
1100 points, ended August 30, 264 entries
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Comments
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Tis what I sleep and dream for.
Love the serene feeling of this piece.
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