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Longing

Breathing a sigh of desperation and longing, I once more turn to my mind for comfort,
That's the only place to find You.
You, who after a long day, holds me in his arms and makes me feel special,
You, who I can dance around the kitchen with singing into a brush while cooking or washing up.
Answers are never far away when a problem is at hand, you always have a solution.

If you were here, my nights  of loneliness would be no more,
I'd have your strong arms around me, making me feel safe,
Your tender touches, and soft caresses driving me to ecstasy.

Where are you, my companion, my lover, my friend?
Oh how much more fun we could have, how much brighter each day would be,
Working through it all together, nothing unachievable.

If you were here.

Author notes

Unfortunately, no man would ever compare to the oe in my dreams I don't think... so love-wise I'm a bit screwed.

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  • very heartfelt

    I like this, it is simple but I can very well relate, I never really thought of...the dream man that you hope exists. It is quite creative and impressive