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Some mirrors don't reflect color.

My dearest friend,

  I noticed today a rather odd stain of tears carefully placed upon your cheek. And at this point it time, I can only show my concern as to why this is so. I’ve never seen such a strong individual break, and honestly, I’m finding this hard to believe.

  You’re heart is so young and pure, and I envy all the vivacity and love it holds, but is it true that you find it dull? Is this what poisons your weakening smiles? Let me tell you, my dear, that I have never seen someone with eyes that glow so bright. Every step you take sends an explosion of wonder into my mind. The grace you carry yourself with is remarkable, and yet you are unhappy.

  I suggest you taking a small fraction of your time to sit on my lap, and let me repeat the immortal melodies you once gave me. I will take what you have given me, and give it straight back to you. Piece by piece, this rainbow will glow inside you as much as it does outside.

  Time was something we were always fond of wasting, but now you can spend it discovering yourself.

  Never cry, my dear. Because you know there’s no reason to. You know we all love you, very much so. I will always be here to kiss your cheeks dry. And I am certain in that fact.


Love always,
Me.

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"Rainbow Viens" by Owl City

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  • i like this,
    the opening is especially good,
    so is the title