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I Will Break




I know I might break.
And I fear I can't take it.
My world is falling apart.
Like a broken record.
I can’t stand this feeling anymore
The one person I loved more that anything is now
somebody I never knew. And someone I could never love.
Did you hear my heart when it broke ?
And did you even care ?
Should I pretend to be happy for your sake?
My lines doesn’t make any sense.
I'm no good to her now.
Lock my heart and leave me alone.

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This is a poem that I wrote about my bestfriend.

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  • xeroabyss II
    September 4
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    I can imagine the feeling of failure and abandon you must feel.


  • PandorasBox
    August 7

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    This is so sad, but I can totally relate to how you're feeling here. I've been treated badly & hurt by someone I love with all my heart, & I'm feeling pretty much the same way about her right now too
    Its a poignant heartfelt write, sweetie, & I hope things get better for you.
    Selena

  • Morgentaake
    July 22
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    Great written baby <3


  • fangs to blame
    July 22

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    Yet to break is impossible for the previously broken. As pain descends it leaves shattered moments. What agony do you feel? What rage tears your chest? As memories fade... unto death you will rest...