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Beautiful Thing

a peninsula of skin and bone
valleys and mountains side by side
rivers of blue, red break off on their own
only to join together yet again
lands of barren tundra
laying along side lush fields
patterns craved out by long dead streams
a single stone or two
snowy ice caps
and a beautiful beach view
living together
peacefully

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I bet you can't guess what I'm talking about. Let me know what you think it is.

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