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Over Who?

Try to understand
before we met there usually was a body around
if not hidden buried in a closet
usually a body was around waiting.
Try to understand
when finally face to face, seeing you see me
was hard to bare knowing my track and scores
never ever would equal your rep.
If finally you understand as do I, then trust
this
lying to you made me so ill I puked after every conversation
knowing in my heart you knew what truth was and yet willingly gave another chance time and time over
made taking you for granted easier until that day
hearing your door quietly slam my face into a wall
tears flowed, rolled and cascaded in my soul as left again
to go back in  old closet where another body
lay around waiting to be resusciated.

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  • BlueNote27
    August 24
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    Wow, love the opening.