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Clouded

a fog clouds my future,
I try to reach out,
not knowing what to find.

  I know you are there,
  my dearest, my love,
  so fair and kind.

yet shrouded in a mist,
clogged by uncertainty,
is my worried mind.

  what will the future bring,
  will my family carry on,
  when I leave them behind?

  and will I find nice work,
  will I get motivation again,
  now that I have resigned.

I long for the time
when I can finally lie down
and totally unwind..

Author notes

Some thoughts regarding my upcoming migration to Norway.

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