I'm holding hands with a mannequin.
Unresponsive, passive, all to auscultate is the beat of a heart against fabric.
--ba-dum. ba-dum. ba-dum.--
Does it hasten as we lock eyes?
Or is it monotonous?, and I'm only here for the endulgement of labels.
--ba-dum. ba-dum. ba-dum.--
You weren't tedious as the first page twisted up and over. The dawn of us.
You spooned out love and catch-me-as-i-fall-lines. I accepted you. I gave you reason to snake your arms around me. Where has that gone?
--ba-dum. ba-dum. ba-dum.--
Needless to say, I still love you. It's those moments when your arms morph perfectly around me that keeps me there. It's those mere seconds when we laugh together.
--ba-dum. ba-dum. ba-dum.--
I just wish that you would show your sincerety towards me more than once a month.
My heart speeds for you. Tell me the same.
Author notes
posh&perfect"
1) Love and the oh so complex feelings it stirs in your head and heart. Not happy "everything's going well" type love, but that "oh i don't know what to do" type love. Whether it be you can't be together, they or you have a partner already or they don't know how you feel, let me FEEEEL what you feel through your writing!
s t e p b y s t e p
sorry if this isn't what you're looking for. (;
A contest entry
- Love&&death; opposites in the world. 2 options, take your pick! by fake-or-real-smile.
550 points, ended August 21, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - favorites; what have I missed? by coloringmysenses.
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - favourites only; come look. by August Starlight.
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the nabisco cookie driver... (:
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a nice one that a mannequins wanna be emotive and alive..gee whata nice wish that you do maintain..some of them are so alluring that you really wish for that-nice poem -
Holy crap. This was amazing ! =)
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This is a really interesting concept.
And I basically could second everything Danielle said... minus that video... lol.
"You spooned out love and catch-me-as-i-fall-lines. I accepted you. I gave you reason to snake your arms around me. "
-- i love that, it's amazing. -
The moment I started reading this, I immediately thought of this dance:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gFeycNysbxo
If that's weird of me to say that, it's okay, I just thought I'd share. XD
Everything about this is so sweet.
It's you entirely because you're incredibly nice,
but it's got that 'awuh' factor in it.
I especially love the '--ba-dum. ba-dum. ba-dum.--'
It's the quirkiness in you too.
I'm amazed at how much this is either intentionally or unintentionally your personality.
Absolutely stunning.
Thank you for entering! <3
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Hahaha, I love Pasha and Lacey. They were my two favveeessss!
hahaha. Thank you for bringing back fond memories.
Thank you thank you thank you!!
I fricken love you!
I was having a pish-posh day but you just made it all the worthwhile. (: (: (: -
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AH! You watch SYTYCD too?!
Ahahaha, I fricken love you too.
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Hmmm interesting! I started reading this and thought "hm not sure if I like it" but got to the end and I am indeed impressed!
I have to praise you on your vocabulary. Very good!
You started this really well:
"I'm holding hands with a mannequin.
Unresponsive, passive, all to auscultate is the beat of a heart against fabric. " love it.
Well done, thanks for entering and good luck.
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Haha, Yeah it was something that was on my mind. (:
Thank you for honorable mention! (;
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no problem at all
and gooooood!
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somtimes love do it like a pill of ecstasy !!! well done ,so nice
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