Tom and Phil,
Went down the mill,
To fetch a glass of "free will",
Phil lost footing and descended,
Broken legs, were never mended,
Tom stood still,
walked down the hill,
to help a soul he had befriended,
picked up the glass,
sat on green grass,
and downed it with a single take.
so sufficiently clean,
"Drink up last call" he sings himself,
"before the sunrise sets the scene."
Author notes
D a n c i n g - I n - T h e - R a i n
Dear Maria, Count Me In.
and The Party Scene.
its my own interpretaion and fusion of both songs....
A contest entry
- everybody knows theres a party at the end of the world by tuesdae.
1300 points, ended July 24, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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LOL
"Dear Maria" was the first thing came in my mind as I read the title
Awesome peom!!!
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haha lol, yeah i intended that to happen!, thts my favourite all time low song :-)
thanks 4 ur comments dan, ur awesome, and we need to seriously catch up on life one day :-) -
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Yes we shud, and no, you're awesome
It's the only song I heard by em
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really? you should listen to their cover song of umberella, its faaar better than rihanna's!
and i'd be here all day trying to persuade u that u ARE in fact awesome! lol, so ill just leave it with we're BOTH awesome! lol :-)
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