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I wake up to this black
Would give anything to get he feeling back
So tired of trying
So tired of crying

Nothing ever comes together
Nothing seems to get better
Everything is not what it should be
Why is this happening to me?

Its just one foot in front of the other 
I知 waiting for the truth to be discovered
I知 so damn lost in this world
Just when I thought I had it all figured out it unfurled

I thought you were everything I ever need, how could I be so wrong
Nothing could be so hard, watching you just move along
Along to your happiness
While I知 stuck here in all this madness

It doesn稚 matter what I do
There will never be, no never anyone like you
Oh, I致e messed things up really good this time around
There will be no love for me to be found

Its just one foot in front of the other 
I知 waiting for the truth to be discovered
I知 so damn lost in this world
Just when I thought I had it all figured out it unfurled

Falling to my safe place where you can稚 hurt me anymore
Its like a thousand pains watching you walk out the door
With you gone I知 like a fish out of the sea
I miss you more then you know I can guarantee 

I would have given every thing for just one last feeling
Your skin on my skin, your lips on my mouth anything to start the healing
But you gone lost to me
I just hope in your happiness you can look back and see

Its just one foot in front of the other 
I知 waiting for the truth to be discovered
I知 so damn lost in this world
Just when I thought I had it all figured out it unfurled

Author notes

when I wrote this it was kind of with the intentions of making it a song but it turned out more like a poem so here it is. i suppose its up to you what it is.

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  • GothicFyre
    July 22

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    It actually does sound like it would work very well as a song ... I can hear the tune in my head - try writing music for it. Bet it would work.