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Free Bird.

I can feel it in my bones
something happening right here
tonight I'm shedding the old skin
courage replaces fear
I've been stuck for too long
hovering in the past
dwelling on forevers
that were hardly meant to last
but tonight I'm breaking free
tonight ends it all
I wont let anyone catch me
who isnt willing to take the fall
There's truth somewhere else now
this all lies in his hands
the love I feel now
Is deeper than that of any human man
I can be who I am
not afraid to express myself
for the pain I'm feeling now
is nothing compared to what some have felt
So i'm breaking tradition
throwing heartache to the wind
and letting life take its toll
cherishing every bend
I'll make it rhough you'll see
hearts in wrists in tact
and as my boys said
2 out of 3 ain't bad
So tonight I die
so that a new me may rise
and for once in my life
Instead of holding back, I'm taking a dive.

Author notes

i am alot different than I was the last time I wrote.

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  • GothicFyre
    July 22

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    I can imagine, this poem really told a story of a new person rising from the ashes of the old, it reminded me of a phoenix rising from the fire. Very poignant.