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The toxic

Toxic, the pure white toxin
A bodily destroyer
A breaker of families

Toxic, the frothy seducer
The reason for death
The reason for idiocy

Toxic, the killer of a soul
It made me cry tonight
It made me run tonight

Toxic, the lingering
The aftermath
The irreversiblity

Toxic, the Killer of a body
A mother hurting her child
A boyfriend haveing to be held back

Toxic, the affects around
The 17 year old grandson crying on his bed
The dry tears and painful memories

Toxic, needs to disappear
Theres no need for it
It needs to dissipate

Author notes

this is my thoughts based on the night i had, the toxic means something...

Edit switched last line's last word and last paragraph's first lines last word to sound better
note to self dont write poems at 1 in the mourning...
its not good

what do you think the toxic is?

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  • Sun-shiney
    July 23

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    are u alright U HAVE ONE INSTANCE TO A COMPUTER AND U DIDN'T CONTACT ME WHAT THE HELL IS THIS POEM? IM SO CONFUSED. I HAVE BEEN WORRIED ABOUT YOU! ....

    don't argue with my boyfriend not a good idea. well anyways. im so worried and ja. love u . geish paul no call no email. is something wrong paul. and why would ur aunt have ur grandmas pills.


  • Boxingboy
    July 22
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    publish

    PUBLISH THIS POEM DUDE IT'S AMAZINGLY AWESOME

    PUBLISH PUBLISH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    oh and also if it's about one of your family members
    or one hell of a painful night with your sickness
    always remember you got friends in high places that always help you
    including the big man himself up that away!

    • jasonstarr
      July 22
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      i'm the grandson,
      my aunt was drinking
      i think my grandmas pills are affecting her
      and my friend/aunts boyfriend might be freeloading


      • jasonstarr
        July 26
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        a

        to clarify my grandmas pills are affecting my grandma not my aunt

  • Boxingboy
    July 22

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    Wow

    this is really good and i have number of guesses my friend but you tell me

    seriously though poeple here on ap know me very well and they know the only way for them to know if they got a good poem is if it's got me saying publish

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