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For The New Little Bundle Of Joy

Dear Destini Renae,


Your the new baby girl,
When you are born the doctors will say your perfect in every way,
You might have your father's hair,
Or maybe your mother's eyes,
But to them you will be everything,
Every day and every night,

 

You are their pride and joy,
And everything you do they will love you for it,
When you take your first steps and say your first words,
Your parents will look back to the date of your birth,
They will remember the tears and the joy,
They will say how much they love you,
And how much they care,

 


There is nothing greater than a mother's love,
Not here not there not anywhere,
There is nothing that can compare,
She loved you from when she first knew your were to be,
She loved you more than anything more than the sky or the sea,
She will take care of you through good times and bad,
No matter what even when your sad,
She will kiss your boo boos,
And make them go away,
She will always be there for you in every single way,
Even when you get older Destini Renae,

And when you say you love her,

It will surely make her day,

 

 

And as for your father,

He loves you too,

Your daddy's little angel,

You will probably be stuck to him like glue,

He is at your side through everything,

And he will surely make you safe,

If anything scares you he will make it go away,

He will love you unconditionally,

This I know for sure,

He will be there when you need him,

And even when you don't,

He can't wait to meet you,

To see you and hold your little hand,

To rock you to sleep at night,

He is already your biggest fan,

 

 

Your mommy and your daddy have waited long enough,

They are eager to see your smiling face,

Your their tiny little gift from up above,

Which they love.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



 

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  • This is a very good write hun. Thank you so much this nearly brought me to tears as well as the others..
    thank you and best of luck to you...

  • danny143
    July 22

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    wow, I dont know, looks like I have some competition!! why do you laugh, it was a beautiful poem. I loved it!

  • very good the only thing i would say is break the poem up into stanzas to make it easier to read and there ya go nice wriet


  • bergettigirl
    July 22

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    very touching and straight from the heart. Absolutely beauty
    brought tears to my eyes. As I have two daughters. As they are in thier teens now. But it brings me back how I felt when I held them in my arms for the first time. I love the dearly. This poem says it all...

  • i like yours better. lol.
    i think it sounds cuter.


    • K-a-r-s
      July 22
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      Thanks but yours is good too are you really 11???

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