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Untrue

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The stereo's up at twenty

and I'm asking you again,

you say you don't know what and who

and where and why and when.

So I call up all your bullshit

and you're selling through the cord

to buy a silver tongue you can't afford.



You kick it all down smoothly,

the place turns ninety-degrees.

Everyone is going home

and you fall to your knees.

Count out-loud the floor boards

as you find, to your surprise,

that half your life is sick of all your lies.



While you're blasting out your music

with an amp placed to the floor,

dreaming of a stereotype

no one's ever seen before

your punctuation has no place here,

it all ends with dot, dot, dot.

Ellipses fill and dominate the plot.

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  • Fedrizzi
    July 22

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    loved the flow of this and the story i got from it, especially the last line of each stanza, another great write from you man, nice nice xD