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A vapor I shall be

I have found that
I have lost myself
To the abysse
Called my life

In this ongoing struggle
Or search as some would say
Just to have a reason
A purpose
While I find many
Trying to claim controle
Over my life
Forcing responsibility
After responsibility upon me
I hide within my own shadow
The only place no one knows
Because no one will dare go
My sanctuary

I see what no one else sees
Therfore I live where no one has lived
For a vapor I shall always be

Each day I question my own exsistance
Only to be lost
In the end

A vapor I shall be

What will be become of me?
How will this end?
What can I do to prove that I exist?
What will be my legacy?

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  • GothicFyre
    July 22

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    I don't know what to say, this was brilliant. I loved the beauty of it all, it was simple but dark and poignant, very well done.