You use to be a given to me
A diary, a best friend, my confidence, my right hand
But now, you're no more to me
than after thought when my mind let's you in
& I'd rather love on that, than your weak bullshit
again
DON'T MAKE ME LEARN TO HATE YOU
Mister Son Of A Bitch..
You use to be a love song to me
The falling in, the falling out, the "all I was about"
But, you're becoming my hurts at night
Cause, my heart won't let me sleep
Or maybe it's the A-B-C murder plans, my conscience won't let me keep
Don't know if I should trust myself - -
Mister Son Of A Bitch..
You use to be my breath of fresh air, yes
The oo's, the ahh's, the damn's of hot sex
But you just slipped to the gnawing twist in my gut
Like the sound of you: "Who's is this?!" During a useless nut
Reminiscing over your nonsense is tightening my fists - -
Mister Son Of A Bitch..
Yeah, I've decided I don't wanna recognize you
acknowledge, speak aloud, admit I even knew you
Was I supposed to worry over where, if I kicked you out, you'd have to go?! PSss - -
I release you from my space, my life, you aren't part of my vocab no mo' - -
Mister Son Of A Bitch. . .
A contest entry
- Best Rhyming Break up Prewrites :] by Ami.
510 points, ended July 30, 55 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Haha! This is a great write. I love it. My fav part:
You use to be a love song to me
The falling in, the falling out, the "all I was about"
But, you're becoming my hurts at night
Cause, my heart won't let me sleep
Or maybe it's the A-B-C murder plans, my conscience won't let me keep
Great job and I really like the style you wrote in.
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LOL...
TELL THAT MF...
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That is wasup
i feel you on that
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Powerful stuff!I loved this. I was a part of this. I FELT this. It was incredible this piece. Good luck in the contest. You deserve the prize! - cgirl0410
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Wow this was Amazing loved the second stanza Great write!
Thanks for entering and Good luck
-♥Amy♥
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