he slinks in like a wet dog
plops down upon her,
hikes her legs
he wimpers like a pup
rolls over - plays dead
Author notes
sometimes monkeys are dogs 
A contest entry
- quick contest -- smells musty by Cat.
669 points, ended July 25, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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something about the line..
hikes her legs that gives the write a sexy feel.. -- i know that wasn't what you were going for .. but i think it's a really good line
in and of itself
have you considered an "and then" on that last?
like this piece very much .
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thanks
mary
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Oh my! Didn't your mom tell yopu to look for the guys with the gleam in their eye?
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Perfect!
lmao... all I am going to say!!!
Linda
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something smells fishy... I mean musty. hehehe
Excellent take on the prompt!
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Too many of us can identify all too well with this one, my Friend. Those of us...who've had monkeys, anyway. 
Good luck in Mary's contest, Sweetie. 
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ty, hon
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Oh yeah, I have missed your skill at brevity, where ya been
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thanks lady
to hellanbach
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LOL Oh the connotations in this one. What more needs to be said when this so eloquently says it all?
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thanks
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