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Another One For You

how can I hate
the embodiment of beautiful
what I would want to be
If I were beautiful

how can I hate
what has it all
when I know its mostly candy
coated over cavities

how can I hate
the words I long to
style so prettily
captured by your hand

how can I hate
what this is now
allowing me to hide
and you to flourish
as I always hoped you could

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