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The Remembered

Past memories dark and bright
Evil past locked up tight
Can't share my emotions ,
They watch and stare
But I don't care
I feel so alone

Other people lying,
Wishing I were dying
Old memories break free,
It's not only me
I am in pain,
So I wait for the rain
So I can cry
Because you wish I would die
I feel so alone

Old memories locked up tight
Some slip away,
Remembering the pain:
Hard break ups,
Many lies,
Mean girls,
Dumb boys
Falling into a reality,
From a fantasy,
To find that nothing was real

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  • Forever more yours
    July 21
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    WONDERFUL!

    I LOVE IT! You expressed that so well! this poem is amazing!