Angels are surrounded by light
shimmering with a rainbow
the power of diamonds in the night
They are married to our heavenly father
and servants to his word.
Do not look in the distance any further
since they are also followers of the Lord.
Angels are our sisters and brothers too.
When we feel lost and have no family
their love comes shining through,
They help us fullfill dreams happily.
We are never alone in our fathers eyes.
Angels bring us closer to heaven.
So they can be our father in disguise,
Since angels will help reach the gate of heaven.
When we are still living on earth
Angels help us realize the truth that we possess,
Also we are so important to everyone after our birth.
They keep us away from sins that we confess
They do for us, What our God will bless.
Angels know that we must live our life
until God calls us and takes us away from strife.
A contest entry
- Titles put number and title in Author notes also want bi BITHDAY POEMS AND TITTALS by Treasure 5.
1500 points, ended September 30, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is really beautiful I really love this. Angels are surrounded by light
shimmering with a rainbowthe power of diamonds in the nightThey are married to our heavenly fatherand servants to his word. They help us fullfill dreams happily.
We are never alone in our fathers eyes. These are some of my favorite lines this was absolutly beautiful. Thank you and welcome to the finals
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A very interesting take on the subject. I like it. You have written well. Very beautifully done. Keep the ink flowing and good luck!
~Donna~!
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interesting
So much has been written and speculated about Angels. I do know they are servants of God and they are all around us doing many things we are unaware of. God thought provoking piece. Great job my friend. God bless you and keep you, Mark
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Oh, a fine write about a much neglected topic--angels. Very finely concieved poem with some fine rhyme and meter as well.... bravo!
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Wonderful
What a terrific write on the subject of angels. You describe them well. Best of luck in the contest.
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Angels in the sky with diamonds
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