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True Selves(Twilight Inspired)

The morning daylight restricts us
Enforces us to walk among the humans
The afternoon sun reveals our true colors
Prompting our marble skin to sparkle like diamonds
But oh, here comes our dear sunset
The moment of the day we long for
A sign that night is almost here
The only time when we don’t have to hide our true selves

Author notes

Definitely not my best work, but I tried.

Prompt: Sunset-day ends
Inspired by Twilight. This is written from the vampires perspective, and for those who don't know, they sparkle in the sunlight. Don't hate me lol!

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  • spiritraven
    July 21

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    Good

    Well written, good imagery. and an interesting bit of trivia to boot. I liked this even though I have not seen Twilight (maybe I will). Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck.