These words are for reading,
but here you stand stopping the bleeding,
i tried for a long time,
so selfish, so hated,
that now i'm debating,
staying locked up in this isolation
or breaking out of this incarceration,
you can tell me you love me,
but it just sounds like a superstition,
paranoid now by your audition,
taking innocents out with your ammunition.
Haha you're so funny,
but I know your secrets,
you're no comedian,
you just hide behind the tears of a clown,
but that's okay,
that's like me,
stole my own hand and now I flee,
don't blame me,
I blame me,
so leave me be,
let me go,
i was done with you years ago.
This is my rendition,
there's no competition,
no definition,
put a stop to this demolition,
this life of ours see's its ambition,
blinding light for this intermission,
my own mission,
drop your guns,
I'm tired of all these damn reruns,
death of father's,
and death of son's
give it up, this can't be fun.
You told me,
face my fear,
laughing at me,
fuck your sneer,
all you could face was a beer
and a stiff one and the end of the day,
so hey, jump back in your Chevrolet,
there ain't no mother fuckers at this buffet,
this is no cliche,
you shut me down,
but I refuse to decay,
this is just one small delay,
but it won't stop me,
you can't stop me,
why don't you turn around,
go back to fucking your banshee,
because I disagree,
this isn't you me and destiny,
it's just me and who I want to be,
so fuck off and back down,
just you and me having a facedown,
but you know i'll win,
'cause it ain't that hard to kill a fucked up clown.
Author notes
So, i did this with my friend Ax (severalmissingteeth) cause... she writes and she is good at it and I wanted her help...? idk haha, but yeah... this one is mecha personal to me so err i kind of don't want corrections or critiques unless it's a misspelled word I guess. But this one took forever to post cause... idk, I'm bad at posting stuff cause i always think it sucks lol but she made me post this. So, here it is. Hope you guys like it.
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wow um this is purely amazing. i loved it. it reminded me of something i use to do, well still do that i shouldn't be doing....anyways. this is really good.
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sometimes the pain within our lives teaches through those same mistakes we make on through all our lives. the trick is not to make the same mistakes and go on with our lives.
Well done my friend!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill
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your stuff never sucks shawn! Especially this, i loved it it's really well written. : )
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Err i can't even take all the credit because I sooo could not of put this all together without Ax haha err so yeah lol but like... idk, it's my anger really, but the cussing was her lol i don't really cuss all that much, but it really helped with the anger effect huh? lol
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Haha yeah cussing does tend to have that effect with anger. But a good effect. : )
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Loved it!
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Err haha really? I kind of do, but I think I'm a bad writer, the only reason it's any good is because of my friend Ax who helped me write it
lol Thanks tho 
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