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a world of deadly world

The trees cry their leaves to the ground,
leaving a litter of death all around.

But in death, a small world does hide,
they live in a world, of death without pride.

Parisitic organisms hide in the decay,
waiting for death each passing day.

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  • XxxNOTCRAZYxxx
    August 10
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    i love it!!!!!!!!!!


    • XxemohatexX
      August 11
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      well i thought it was decent so i put it up lol... im glad you liked it<3 stephanie


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    July 26

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    Interesting little write that is so true!
    I love your thoughts here. Thanks a lot
    for your entry and good luck to you with it
    in our contest. Take care!




    Jeremy0826