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Total Understanding

“You are the strongest person that I have ever known or will ever know”
how nice it was to hear these words
he looked at me with;
A D M I R A T I O N
L O V E
S T R E N G T H
O F  C H A R A C T E R
did I teach him that?
did he learn it from me?
he’s mine;
but firstly, he’s himself,

how proud I am of him
i needed to hear those words today
i had given up
i didn’t want to stay
once again, we touched in our hearts
just like
the time
our eyes met
across the playground
when he was 8
© May 2008 Joannie McCutcheon ©

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  • Rick Weston silver member
    August 1

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    what a beautiful poem and even lovelier scene illustrated. funny how hearing the right thing, at the right time - ie today, can make all the difference. very nice write.


    • chilequeen gold member
      August 1
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      What a lovely comment

      Thanks Rick, I enjoyed reading your comments. Yes, just at the right time. Hope that it was the right time for you to read.
      Joannie