Silver shines in the light
The sharpness is awakening
Start in a fresh place
I dont know why anymore?
I dont want to carry on
But this is how I live
This is my life....
Make cuts along my skin
No difference
Just adding to the collection....
I fall back down to Earth,
In the soft bed
Eyes wide open in the dark,
Tears fall down my cheek
It's taken ove my mind,
It's taken over my soul,
It's taken over my life.
Author notes
i hope this better than the draft....please feel free to comment thank you xxx
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i really like this poem :]]
the first two stanzas are really good
but the last one sounds a little off. idk
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thanks,yh i know what you mean it does sound a bit iffy...im not sure how to end it
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hey. i really lik this poem. r u lik ging thru this??? i am.. lol.. when u end up finshing this poem i bet its gonna be really good cause i already lik it.. lol.
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lol im glad you like it =)
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i like what youve written so far. really does show what self harm does to you. great job. cant wait to read it once its finished
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thank you =) glad you like it so far
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