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La La Land

Seeing what he did to her,
makes me wonder if you'll do it to me.
you have the same reasons as him.
you were on his side like he had a reason.
so i think,"is he guna do the same??"
i can just hope and pray that you don't.
cause i love you,and i don't want it to end.

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  • Dargian silver member
    February 5
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    This is a very nice poem! Short and sweet! I also wonder about the story behind it!


  • dinn0011
    December 20, 2009
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    passion

    I wonder the story behind the poem. It is really good though. I hope he dose not do what you are afreaid he might do.


  • liltaz13
    November 30, 2009
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    yes

    perfectcy


  • LiL NeMo
    November 25, 2009
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    datz nice

    dat wuz a rlly good poem ha oh


  • Em0ZCupcake
    August 14, 2009
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    whose it bout nwhose dis jas


  • HuertaGirl
    August 4, 2009
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    oh yeh! haha

  • lil elmo
    July 25, 2009
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    omg

    i thout he would too


  • xochocoholicxo
    July 22, 2009
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    of course i love it but i don't get the title

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