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Emotionally Hurt

hurting emotionally
dont know if shes still perfect for me

my world turned upside down
my smile faded with a frown

i wana work things out
put the flame in our life out

start over new like nothing happened
i dont want our relationship to end

but if you dont want me
then i understand b

do i really treat you bad?
are you sad and mad? with me?

i want you in my life
you make me feel so right

please dont cheat on me baby
i know i can treat you like a lady

just give me another chance
to enhance our romance!!!!!

wrote this for my gf jess....wrote it bc of our argument and im still hurt about it

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  • Borntowriteforever
    July 21

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    arguements are never easy, i beat myself over the ones I have. my favorite line was "i know i can treat you like a lady". it shows the devotion and determination you have with being with her. really good


  • sexyremedy
    July 21

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    i kno what went down last night left a big impact on us and maybe even opened our eyes to some things b
    yes we're going to hurt over this for a lil while but jus remember ur not alone b u have me n i have u n im never ever leaving u baby <3333333333333333333333333333