She denied stealing
his heart;
she was correct.
She disguised it
with her deceit.
He no longer
recognized it himself,
giving it to her
that very moment, and
taking it from me...
Like the sands
in an hour glass,
time slowed down
for me,
moving ever so deliberately,
grain after grain
finally stopping...
My soul became dormant,
my spirit debilitated.
The face of anguish
became my own,
a body of deprivation
now the core of my essence.
A portion of me
was still there,
crumbling away
piece by piece;
the other half
now belonging to her
yet...
not to him...
Pain turned into faith,
in me, for him, us.
Never did I stop believing,
knowing, and praying
we would reunite.
Patience became my assailant,
hovering over me
like a symphony
without a song to play
frustrated...
What we shared together
was too stable to be removed
by anothers falseness,
and indemnity
He began looking at her
and seeing me,
holding her
wishing it be me.
Dreaming of me
only...
Soon we will be
united again, forever,
the end of a lonesome nightmare,
the beginning of
a second chance,
another life
with you
I miss you, my love...
can you hear me ?...
Author notes
DEDICATED TO MY FRIEND, NYETTA.." SIS"
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"can you hear me?..."
Quite clearly, yet with many questions and desire burning brightly within.
I'm getting so lost, again, just this time with a profound sense of what home is.......
Languid,
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~ Janet ~ ~
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There are those who would attempt to steal the only gift that truly matters, being someone's love. They would not value its measure, in any sense. I think when people try to take another's heart, it's from envy and a lack of knowledge in how to achieve their own happiness, in many respects. I see this is another dedication poem and its subject was quite moved by your gesture of comfort. Well done, Poet. 
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ohh i like this very good write great actually i love it awe..
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I can feel your pain. She must have been very important to you. I hope you recover.
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I am sure she can hear you.
Brilliant
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With Tears in my eyes all i can say is Thank you
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It is not easy to remove yourself from yourself and become another person. To imagine their pain, and then to express it for them in a way that makes one believe that they are reading their words. Very, very well done. Rose.
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Thank you very much..appreciated.
John
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My Dearest Brother...
I am moved beyond words! I don't know what to say! You took my thoughts, his thoughts, our hearts, our pain, and found a way to put it into words that are just amazing! What a beautiful job you did on this one! This is truly beautiful..... Thank you!
and love
Nyetta
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What is a brother to say?..Be happy
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I will be even happier when this is over...... I am happy now, but i know what is lieing ahead for me
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I feel your relief...only thanks I need
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Thank you,Suzi.What would I do without your words
John
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Okay don't panic when you read this first bit okay....
This is kind of eerie... lol
I said don't panic... now why did you panic? Geesh you never listen! Just let me finish okay? Naw seriously, it is only eerie because Nyetta and I have been long time friends so I know the situation she is going through and I also know you! It is only eerie because I know YOU wrote this... lmbo ( and of course you are not involved in that situation... now do you get the eeriness of it?)
Actually the poem itself is very beautiful and speaks the language of love.
Nyetta will love it, I am sure
Suzi
P.S. - check your messages dear
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you write love so beautifully
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I appreciate your comments..Thank you
John
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John I really like this alot. You did a great job on this piece. I know how that feels I know what it is to feel that you want to reunite with someone but not sure how to do so or how it is going to end. Great job on this piece thank you for sharing.
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So nice you are for taking the time to comment
John
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I love how you finish this poem with a question. I love the image you created with the word symphony. Also the sand glass is just brilliant. Well done.
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Thank you so kindly..I appreciate your words
John
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By God pleasure no one miss your lines here
For you have got a great talent of writing a lot of bautiful lines in poetry "dedicated to 'your' friend, Nyetta"... We also are happy to greet that dear frind over your ...Sis...
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So kind and generous with your comments.Thank you
John
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Amazing, truly amazing. A classic in the making.
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So kind you are..Thank you so mush..nice of you
John
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