When I'm in your breathtaking presence
My face blushes a dark shade of red
From a quick glance at your cute face
Heart beating faster, pulse racing
As I go in to kiss your tender sweet lips
I become overcome with ecstasy
Holding your hand as we walk in the night sky
I am more happy than anyone can imagine
Making me think about how amazing you are
In bed we cuddle close and passionately
Holding you in my arms comforting you
The feeling of love flows throughout my body
It's actually sorta amusing and stunning
That even after 3 years have passed
You still make me feel like I first did!
Author notes
Confuzzled1
A contest entry
- what i want... by Suffer-in-silence.
455 points, ended July 25, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I really liked this, especially the third stanza, it makes me think of my current boyfriend. I loved this poem, it's so cute.
XXCrimsonRaineXX
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Awwww! Cute pickachur at the beginning!
Very refreshing poem of simple, almost child-like, romance. ^-^
Great job!
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oh yeah i also really love the picture it soooooo cute
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this is a really great poem i love it.
i really like the part that goes
"When I'm in your breathtaking presence
My face blushes a dark shade of red
From a quick glance at your cute face"
thats adorable.
Thanks fot entering :-)
-Rose
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this is really good. it makes me remember the time i was in love. keep up the good work
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This is one of the most sweetest things I've read in a long time ... great write! and good luck in the contest!!
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