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The Blood Red White Rose

The soul is dying,
My heart is crying,
As I try to go to sleep.
The rain is pouring,
Over the roses,
The snow white roses,
Stained in my deep red blood.
The wound won't close
The hole won't fill,
My mind can't go to rest.
And my blood is still pouring
Over the roses,
The snow white roses,
Stained in my deep red blood.

No one knows this wound I carry,
This deep heart sore.
The soul is crying,
As my heart is dying,

And.
I can't go to sleep.
The sleep that takes me
Is what makes me,
And I can't go to sleep.
The pain that shakes me,
Is what takes me,
And it won't go away.

I have no love,
So my tears are pouring,
Over the roses.
The snow white roses,
Stained in my deep red blood.

And I still can't fall asleep,
The sleep that takes me,
Shakes me,
Makes me,
Saves me,
And,
I
Still
Can't
Go
To
Sleep.

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  • MasterFoxFang
    August 3

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    Great

    well done I must say the way the words flowed and coincided with each other is very good I love the imagery you put into this very poetic and the chorus was very nice well done glad i read it.


  • StillLovingYou
    July 21
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    very nice! where did you get the backroung from? great job!