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Laborium Machina

I was told a simple thing: that
All of life resides within what
We call a physical mundane,
Even to the point where our pain
And pleasure only satisfy
That measure of existence. In its
Defence, I can say I pursued
Truth that way and found, at the end,
That, while the substance lacked, I could
Depend on the tools that were used.

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  • Budart
    July 22

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    I am not quite sure what this is about. It is well written but not clear, at least to me sorry. Thanks for the entry.

    • It's about the scientific paradigm...

      ...and my learning there is truth beyond it.

      MA


  • ionabus
    July 21
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    Interesting poem, love the last line, best of luck in the contest. Well done, I enjoyed reading this.