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Haiku – [owl]


owl-
two yellow moons
in slow rotation



In a list

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  • Draig aine gold member
    July 30
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    congradulations on the silver

    perfection


  • sheltered
    July 25
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    superb
    and I would expect no less from you


  • SteveS gold member
    July 25
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    Nice imagery for a slow moving owl head. and congrats.

  • Bruce silver member
    July 25
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    Oh wow! This one is brilliant Mal! Outstanding!


    • Malabu
      July 26
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      thanks bruce...amazing how owls turn their heads


  • Swan song gold member
    July 25
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    Excellent haiku


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    July 21

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    excellent~

    Always love you haikus Mally
    Best of luck in the contest
    It's a winner in my book
    I have still yet to see you visit my page
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • Naughtygrlred
    July 21
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    nice


  • DeJaBlue gold member
    July 21

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    This one is nice.
    A great nature write.
    Good luck in the contest.

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