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Rain Bliss

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I love it when we are in the rain
Clothes soaked against our skin
Sweet pleasure constantly remains
As you know the mood it puts me in

My arms wrapped around your behind
While I slowly press my lips to yours
You know what's going through my mind
With every rain drop dripping on you so pure

I taste you like a hunger within my soul
As you moan from my erotic touch
Once I have you it's like we can never let go
For passion is such a heated rush

It always seems like just one kiss
Tends to lead to so much more
I guess we can call this a bit of "rain bliss"
For what we are about to have in store

Author notes

Using the picture in a contest I'm hosting and forgot where I got it from, but may have said it in my contest

Marked Adult for sexual insinuations.

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  • Your words so truly lovely they flow like a fountain!!! This is very very beautiful and so well portrayed a truly fantabulous piece!!! I love it!!!


    • Ted E Bare gold member
      September 19
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      Thank you ever so kindly for your precious comment.

      Ted E


  • Pisces Pieces
    August 6

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    Ah, if only...


    Romantic and well felt..

  • Such a lovely piece indeed.

    Great job

    xox

    Passionspromise


    • Ted E Bare gold member
      July 28
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      Thank you for your lovely words and hope things are getting better for you


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 21

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    This is just beautiful, love the rain and the picture just helps to bring it alive.
    Soft and sensual. Is what this truly is.

    • Ted E Bare gold member
      July 28
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      Thank you so much for a great comment, tried to rate it five stars and the system won't let me. Must be something new they have done since I have not been here in a week

  • I know where you got the pic
    Loved the poem and I know your rain mate surely did too.
    Roses to you Ted

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